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DNP Degree, Chinese, Cantonese & Mandarin

I ask for admission to your DNP Program at XXXX University because it brings me especially great delight to be able to provide culturally sensitive care to my patients. This is especially true with Asian and most particularly Chinese patients since I am a fully bilingual Chinese speaker of Cantonese…

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CRNA Program, Russian Immigrant

I now feel that I have the necessary experience to excel in a Master’s Program and become a CRNA and I want to pursue my highest aspirations, my ideal: the Master’s Degree in Nurse Anesthesia at XXXX University. A rugged individual both psychologically and physically, I thrive on pressure and feel m…

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FNP, Focus on the Underserved

I ask for admission to your distinguished Master’s Program in Nursing at XXXX University because I seek to become the finest Family Nurse Practitioner possible, realizing my fullest professional potential.  My focus is on the underserved, particularly women and children, and I am especially concerne…

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DNP Program Recommendation 1, Corrections

To the DNP Admissions Committee at XXXX University

My name is XXXX MD and I am a medical care provider at XXXX Correctional Facility as I work for the XXXX Department of Public Safety. I am very pleased to recommend my friend and colleague Nurse XXXX to your distinguished program because I am con…

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DNP Program Letter of Recommendation 2 Corrections

To the DNP Admissions Committee at UXX

I am very pleased to recommend my colleague XXXX for your distinguished DNP Program at XXXX University. My name is XXXX and I have now been serving as a nursing supervisor for the last 20 years for the XX Department of Public Safety. I first met Nurse XXXX i…

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DNP Goal Statement, Holistic Healing, Underserved

My goal for DNP studies at XXXX University is to be the finest DNP possible. I am currently serving as an RN on a psychiatric unit working with patients in acute crisis. Raised in a family of humanistic and holistic healers, the daughter of a nurse educator, and the sister of a nurse midwife—my fath…

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MS Degree Program Nursing, Latino Community

The greatest strength of my application to your especially distinguished Masters Program in Nursing at the University of XXXX is undoubtedly the fact that I am not only a nurse, but that I am also fully bilingual and bicultural. I am a Mexican woman who is most fully dedicated to addressing the nurs…

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Undergraduate Nursing, BSN Degree, Career Change

Your especially distinguished nursing program at XXXX is my first choice for study towards the BSN degree for a variety of reasons, particularly your explicit focus on diverse student populations, which attracts me as Korean woman who adores diversity. At 32 years old, the decision to become a nurse…

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Entry Level MSN Program, Public Health, FNP

Why XXXX University: I want very much to become a nurse and to build my career in nursing; yet, my undergraduate degree is in Public Health, a closely related field that, in fact,  has served to inspire me to a career in nursing. My current internship as a Nurse’s Assistant has also served to make …

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DNP Studies, Psychiatric, Crisis Intervention

My goal for DNP studies at XXXX University is to be the finest DNP possible. I am currently serving as an RN on a psychiatric unit working with patients in acute crisis. Raised in a family of humanistic and holistic healers, the daughter of a nurse educator, and the sister of a nurse midwife—my fat…

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Doctor of Nursing Practice, Nurse Anesthesia DNP-NA

Having completed an undergraduate degree in Flute Performance, I like to think that my background in music has helped me to cultivate creativity, dedication, perseverance, and to learn to prioritize at an early age—all qualities that have been instrumental so far to my success in nursing. Adaptable,…

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MSN Psychiatric Mental Health, Dementia, Depression

 

I was not looking forward to a rotation in a locked psychiatric ward during my BSN training, it was merely something to be endured in order to reach my goal of becoming a midwife.  I found the ward to be a disturbing environment but was filled with sympathy for the patients and curious about t…

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CRNA Masters, Korean-American, Army

I feel that one of the greatest benefits of being a professional nurse is the gratification that comes from easing the suffering of others. I have focused on anesthesia because I want to devote the balance of my professional life to this cause. I am a US Army Captain and serving my country is my fir…

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MSN Masters, FNP, Haiti Earthquake Volunteer

My intellectual, professional, and clinical interests are all a result of my intense passion for nursing, especially nursing education. I earned my AS Degree in Nursing in 2002 and just finished my BSN. I am especially highly motivated because of my fascination with research, in particular, the agin…

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GMSN Non-Traditional, Hospice, Bay Area

XXU is my first choice to study towards the MSN because I love the progressive aspects of your curriculum which mirror the creativity and sense of promise in diversity and humanity that generally characterizes the Bay Area. My academic work ethic is high as is demonstrated by my undergrad GPA of 3.7…

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PHD Doctor of Public Health Nursing, African

I am currently finishing up my Master’s Degree in our Nurse Practitioner Program at XXXX University. I have a special emphasis in my studies on adults, most particularly our geriatric population. My compassion for my patients, and the older they are the more that I love them, is matched only by my a…

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MSN, ANP, Cardiology, Russian Immigrant

I am a Russian woman from Latvia and a nurse who has now made her home in America. At 32, I feel strongly that I am now at my optimal point for a return to full time study in my field. My main area of interest is cardiology and I a looking for a way to give something back to my community in this are…

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MSN Public Health Education, Minority Issues

I am a young woman who has recently finished my BS Degree. Half African-American and half Puerto Rican, I have celebrated multicultural diversity my entire life, especially since I was a military child and we moved around constantly. I completed my BS in Public Health at XXXX University in 2005 with…

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BS Nursing, Chinese Immigrant

Seven years ago, I moved to America from China at the age of 15. Thus, my adulthood so far has been taken up by becoming a Chinese American rather than simply Chinese, and becoming a mother.  Now, I want very much to become a nurse.

I was not inspired to become a nurse until I saw all these nurs…

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DSN, Doctor of Science in Nursing, Latina Nurse

I am a woman of Puerto Rican ancestry who was born in New York. Since late adolescence, I have been dedicated to my career in nursing, completing both my BSN and my MSN at XXXX College. Now 41, I am a nurse who has time to develop a great deal of passion about patients, and to have strong feelings a…

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