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Entry Level MSN Program, Public Health, FNP

Why XXXX University: I want very much to become a nurse and to build my career in nursing; yet, my undergraduate degree is in Public Health, a closely related field that, in fact,  has served to inspire me to a career in nursing. My current internship as a Nurse’s Assistant has also served to make …

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DNP Studies, Psychiatric, Crisis Intervention

My goal for DNP studies at XXXX University is to be the finest DNP possible. I am currently serving as an RN on a psychiatric unit working with patients in acute crisis. Raised in a family of humanistic and holistic healers, the daughter of a nurse educator, and the sister of a nurse midwife—my fat…

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Doctor of Nursing Practice, Nurse Anesthesia DNP-NA

Having completed an undergraduate degree in Flute Performance, I like to think that my background in music has helped me to cultivate creativity, dedication, perseverance, and to learn to prioritize at an early age—all qualities that have been instrumental so far to my success in nursing. Adaptable,…

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MS Master´s Clinical Nurse Program, Indian Applicant

A  hard  working  woman  who  was  born  and  raised  in  India, I have now  been living  in the United  States  for the  past  ten  years. I moved to the U.S. in 2002 after marrying a U.S. citizen and have been living with my in-laws since that time. I am now the  mother  of   two  beautiful  boys,…

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CRNA Masters, Korean-American, Army

I feel that one of the greatest benefits of being a professional nurse is the gratification that comes from easing the suffering of others. I have focused on anesthesia because I want to devote the balance of my professional life to this cause. I am a US Army Captain and serving my country is my fir…

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FNP ICU, Multilingual Vietnamese-American

After graduating from XXXX State with my BSN in Nursing, I began my career with XXU Health on a floor that specializes in post surgical patients, especially those with traumatic injuries. I was nervous but very eager to learn. Taking care of patient’s physiological, psychological and spiritual needs…

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WHNP Women’s Health Nurse Practitioner, Filipina

I had a really good time in nursing school in general; but nothing else excited me as much as my course in women’s health. This is why I have my sights set on becoming a distinguished WHNP and I hope to perform all of my clinical work in this area. I have complete confidence in the distinguished fac…

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Masters, ANP Adult Nurse Practitioner, Portuguese

I want to become a nurse practitioner because nursing is my life and I want to advance in my career, becoming the finest ANP possible. I do not spend much time on facebook; when I am there, it is usually to share experiences with other nurses. At least with the exception of my daughter, my top prior…

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MSN Masters, Military Nurse, FNP Healthcare Mgmt

I am applying to your distinguished program at XXXX University because I see it as the best fit for my high level of motivation and extensive professional responsibility. I also feel strongly that my personal nursing philosophy is well aligned with the mission of your program with respect to diversi…

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Nursing Masters, CRNA, Devout Catholic Man

XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study because I am not only a devout Catholic but also a fervent admirer of the Jesuit tradition. I am convinced that the election of history’s first Jesuit pope will help us to usher in novel and creative advances from a Catholic perspective on the ma…

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MSN, Cuban Applicant, Missions to Nicaragua

My application to your distinguished Master’s in Nursing Program at the University of XXXX is inspired primarily by my job as an ER nurse at the XXXX Medical Center in XXXX. I began serving here shortly after finishing my BSN Degree in May of 2012. Prior to that time, I spent more than a year here w…

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Doctor of Nursing Practice Degree, Education

Practice/Experience/Leadership: Out of my 16.5 years of nursing experience, I now have 14 years of progressive leadership experience in team development, staff retention programs and the maintenance, operation, and enhancement of patient services. I also earned my BSN (2006) and MSN (with a focus i…

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Master´s Degree in Nurse Anesthesia, Saudi Woman

I want very much to attend your program at XXU because of the personal attention afforded by your small classes, excellent lab facilities, world-class faculty, and extremely high quality and accessible resource centers. I also very much appreciate your hands on approach to learning and the way that …

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Master’s Nurse Anesthesia, ICU, Filipino

As a man, I am proud to be a nurse. And as a Filipino, I am especially pleased to contribute to the beautiful diversity that characterizes the face of health care in America. I have been working as a Registered Nurse now for almost 5 years, ever since I immigrated to America from the Philippines, fo…

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MSN, Masters Nursing Anesthesia, CRNA

I was born in New York and raised in St. Louis and now reside in Atlanta. I hold the degrees of B.S. in Biology and B.S. in Nursing (Magna cum Laude) and am a Registered Nurse. I am a well qualified and highly experienced nurse now wishing to specialize in a demanding field which will fully use my a…

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Nursing Residency, Diversity

I was born and raised in Indonesia. I lived in Germany for four years before moving to the United States in 1991. I expect to graduate with the Bachelor in Science of Nursing degree in August of this year. I speak English, German, Indonesian and Javanese. My goal is to become a very effective, and h…

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MS, Masters Nurse Anesthesia, African Man

I was born and raised in a rural area of Ethiopia. Growing up, I soon became highly cognizant of the huge health problems that burdened our community. By the time that I was in High School, I was already dreaming of becoming a nurse, so that I could help the people in my community who were suffering…

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MSN, Masters CRNA, Rural Health

I feel that I am a strong candidate for advanced study towards the Masters Degree in Nursing Anesthesia because of my vast experience in the field of nursing. Decades of service to my community as a nurse have made me well qualified to assume the high levels of responsibility that are part of the ev…

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MSN Entry Clinical Nurse Program, MECN, Indian

A  hard  working  woman  who  was  born  and  raised  in  India, I have now  been living  in the United  States  for the  past  ten  years. I moved to the U.S. in 2002 after marrying a U.S. citizen and have been living with my in-laws since that time. I am now the  mother  of   two  beautiful  boys,…

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DNP, Doctor Of Nursing Practice Degree, Chinese

When I came to America with my husband fifteen years ago, it was the culmination of a long journey. I had been born and raised in Shanghai in the period before the economic boom really took hold in China, when healthcare outside the large cities was rudimentary at best. From my earliest recollection…

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